December 23, 2011

Did a little brainstorming and whatnot regarding chapter 1. Biggest accomplishment: I wrote the first sentence!

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Roma Taft stood between the battlements, looked down over the sprawling, mountainside city of Ederea, and watched its far edge burn.

Yes, big changes are on tap for Book 2.

Fussy writer comment: I’m not too happy with “watched its far edge burn” but there will be wordsmithing, my friends, oh yes.

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