Yes, you heard it here friends. Chapter 29 is officially demon spawn.
I think Jon put it best when he said in his critique, “Well done. However, it was definitely not as polished…”
So yah, it sucked, and it has been sucking up my time as well. But it’s done! I have edited out just over 1300 words, knocking it down to by two whole single spaced pages. Good thing too, because I was just about to start looking for a banishment spell.
And in other news, I’ve made two good passes on chapter 34, a brand new chapter that all the other new material made necessary. That leaves me with just one newish chapter to write, along with 5(?) more to edit.
PS my allergies are completely kicking my ass. Sympathy please! 😉